lol this is hillarious!

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Haha sucks to be Aang

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Zutara? XD
Amazing job on the chibi work.
Never trust Zuko to give advice on girls. Or Azula on boys. 0-0

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thanks, I have a couple more ideas, so I'm thinking of making more

THIS IS HILARIOUS.

Well, you welcomed criticism, right? So here goes. You shouldn't tilt comic bubbles like that, it looks unnatural. It's okay if they're not fully contained in the panel, but it's more natural if they're not tilty, and the text is straight. It's a bit hard to read when it's tilty. Except for the last bubble, which works well that way.

Aang's face in the second panel is probably the best expression you produced. It's just totally GLEE. (You might want to look into a chibi face tutorial, chibis are harder to draw than they look: I certainly can't do them... a couple of your faces are a little awkward. Mainly Katara's in the last panel.)

The soft background works really well, it doesn't distract but it's better than if you would've just had a blank thing going on. You could've had harder lines on the characters, it would've made them pop out a bit more. Try inking, if you're going to color in photoshop, or if you have trouble with that, darkening the lines by duplicating the layer as a multiply layer or using the levels adjuster.

Just a few things to keep in mind if you're going to keep doing comics. Something I'd definately suggest you do. You have quite a good sense of deadpan humor going on here. I laaaughed. That was a well put together joke. And it's way harder to find good writing than it is to find good artists. If you keep practicing, you'll get your technique together. But it's hard to learn to write funny dialogue. You wrote funny dialogue! Woo. Yeah. XD The joke came out really well.

Welcome to DeviantArt. Hope you didn't mind the criticism.

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the guy can't seem to catch a break

lol, I guess it was a bit of zutara and kataang,

haha, yeah

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whoa, that's some criticsm! And I thank you for it this is my first comic, and Imma complete noob artist, so I always welcome critism so that I can improve my work. So thanks, I'll be sure to keep these things in mind when making the next one.